|Reviews for Martian|
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
Definitely feeling a scifi vibe here - great stuff, great visual present-ness.
| die kleine maus chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
i like how you end with a sort of irony through the rhyme, and your use of short lines is, as always, brilliant. i like that word, "brilliant", and it's nice when i get to use it...
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
'the other is your souvenir, dear' nice way to end it. nice detail.
| Sharon Jan chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
Deliciously morbid humour. Well done.
| forsakensmile chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
I like this. It's unique, and its very humourous.
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
Interesting flow and word choice. Well written. "Within the skull's heart.", is a uniquely used phrase. Good write.