Reviews for Stranger
Jesse the Storyteller chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
Is the ending so abrupt because your time was over? I'm thinking yes...

I like it, it's kind of like a scene from a movie... you're excellent at letting people see what is happening.

Although... if he's from earth... why does he have wings?

-Jesse
dreamshell chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
seems like the picture-prompt worked quite well. maybe i should try it out. i like how you cut the story off all of a sudden.
Vyvyan chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
Wow. This is facinating. You should continue!