|Reviews for Flying with the Sun|
| Random Fan is Back chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
I LOVED it! It was SO beautiful! I loved how he was 'goth', but she was an actual individual. And how she was so nice to everyone...and going to the dance with Jake gave me chills! Awesome job! I LOVED this!
| midnight-vortex chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
That was beautiful.
| I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
I love you! Where DO you come up with all this? I don't even know where to start praising you!
The beginning reminded me a lot of Catcher in the Rye, the tone, the opinions of the narrator, everything. The first paragraph was excellent! Had me laughing and interested at once.
Wonderful development throughout. Enough detail to keep it all moving and yet not so much that it takes away from the plot. This is so much harder to write than a Hardy-style overly descrptive novel.
Loved this piece so much...and feel that my review really isn't adequate enough...m'apologies! :)
| fire0ice chapter 1 . 3/2/2006