|Reviews for Gazebo|
| Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
Fanciful and embracing. Favorite lines:-We are astronauts falling after silly things:
like boys and macadamia nuts
(carnations are too cheap for us)
| Spare Change chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
Such a modern pop Japaneesy image you have here. I imagine girls with technicolor hair eating expensive chocolates, floating in space... haha. XD
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
So many brilliant and well placed images. A favorite for sure. Great write.
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
i like this craze. you are a nice writer. i mean it, it's pretty the way you write.
| Dee Dub chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
Hey, I love this. It was unexpected.
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
cute and entertainingi like the spark of it
all of this happiness.
| ronshaberry chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
You keep changing your style! I can't keep up with you. You know, these metaphors are popping out of nowhere and they're so random and yet they make sense. Lovely "we are" kinda flow.
| randompoetry chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
Wow, this is magnificent. I'm in awe here. Best work I've seen on this site in a while.
| Drops of Jewpiter chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
great poem, it's def. unique. i love your writing style. good job :)dropsofjewpiter