Reviews for Gazebo
Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
Fanciful and embracing. Favorite lines:-We are astronauts falling after silly things:

like boys and macadamia nuts

(carnations are too cheap for us)
Spare Change chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
Such a modern pop Japaneesy image you have here. I imagine girls with technicolor hair eating expensive chocolates, floating in space... haha. XD
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
So many brilliant and well placed images. A favorite for sure. Great write.
a lonely september chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
i like this craze. you are a nice writer. i mean it, it's pretty the way you write.
Dee Dub chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
Hey, I love this. It was unexpected.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
cute and entertainingi like the spark of it

all of this happiness.
ronshaberry chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
You keep changing your style! I can't keep up with you. You know, these metaphors are popping out of nowhere and they're so random and yet they make sense. Lovely "we are" kinda flow.
randompoetry chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
Wow, this is magnificent. I'm in awe here. Best work I've seen on this site in a while.
Drops of Jewpiter chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
great poem, it's def. unique. i love your writing style. good job :)dropsofjewpiter