Reviews for The End of the World |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds very very interesting! please continue soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...I just loved your description of this "glowing" mystery man. It was so incredibly vivid. I almost felt like I was the one standing out in the rain, watching him. Heck, I probably wouldn't have minded much either, even with the world ending and all. _ Keep up the awesome writing. You're extremely talented! D |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story, i can't wait to read more!i wonder what the earth will look like. more please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() o. this is quite interesting. "It's the end of the world and we know it. And I feel fine..." sorry, song playing in my head. hm... i wonder wat happenz next... ~urXpoeticXfrend |
![]() ![]() I am truely amazed by your talent. I'm not ever slightly joking, this story had my heart breaking and mending before I was even done the Porlogue. Please, please, please tell me when you've added anything to it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Somehow, I just complelety laugh at Yak's name. Dunno why. Keep going with this - looking good. luv Ife |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa - brill tension (well, I think it's tension) and what a character with what a life. Well done for inventing something like this. luv Ife |
![]() ![]() ![]() More stuff, so now I'm guessing that the dude was an alien?...this is really gripping, excellent writing and description. luv Ife |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very scary, very very scary. Seriously, I have no idea who the girl is, no idea where they are, but I find it very scary. In a spingle (that's short for spine tingle) way. luv Ife |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, ok...so i'm kind of confused! Um, all i've gotten so far is that they're all stuck underground somewhere...but i must read more! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, this is what I've pieced together: Lila and Olivia are sisters and they're stuck after the bomb underground somewhere with some other people. The prologue and the first chapter are yet to make sense to me, but I'm sure I'll piece them together soon! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() And now I'm more confused. Something tells me Lila will be a main character, but what about Laquisha? And was that Lila in the first chapter? And pregnant from *what* exactly? |
![]() ![]() ![]() And it just got more confusing! And it leaves me guessing again! yay! So an alien bomb dropped? And these people are trapped together? Now I'm hooked, I have to know what's going on here... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, a very confusing beginning. I love confusing beginnings, they leave me guessing. So is he an Angel of Death or something? Great start. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oo a hot glowing guy |