Reviews for Lachrymose
Galadh Niniel chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
Absolutely amazing imagery, I love this poem.
Eirien chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
Wow. Very sophisticated, every word is perfectly selected, the whole poem is like a sparkling little gem in a fine silver setting. Great job, and I don't say this only because I am always attracted to poems about tears. ;-)
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
your vocab just suns me. i can't even write a haiku and yet you can write ten gorgeous ones? life isn't fair.

i enviously yearn for more.

* noelle
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
beautiful hiaku nicely done

keep writing!