Oh... I like. Is this a ballad type song or a faster one? 'Cause I could imagine it being both. The lyrics r really good. Just a question, is "So you took them far away to me" supposed to be "...far away from me"? If u ever record this I'd like to hear it. BTW, I added a new part to Love Should Be a Crime if you wanna check it out. :)

Later!

I don't like the Chorus on the left while everything else is centered. Is that on purpose, or did it just happen? Anyway, the words are good, and you've got flow. Nice work overall!