| Reviews for Momento |
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  GLo chapter 13 . 4/21/2007 wow that was really good kudos to u |
| Glo chapter 4 . 4/21/2007 ew lol this is addictive |
| your buddy glo chapter 2 . 4/21/2007 i dont like the bf lol |
| Ur buddy Glo chapter 1 . 4/20/2007 good trailer i liked it time to read the rest! |
 T. K. Ryder chapter 11 . 6/23/2006 OOH! So there were Reapers before Lois! This is good, but seems to be MADE for a movie. It has tons of cliffhangers and lots of description, but no character development whatsoever. This would be good for a movie, is a good idea, but doesn't really work for a story in my opinion. I would like to see how it ends, though. |
| jamesbuc chapter 9 . 5/2/2006 Owtch. Painful. :) |
| Emo Boy chapter 7 . 4/15/2006 The Reaper, eh? |
| CharlotteMarie chapter 7 . 4/14/2006 Awesome job with this. I was hooked after I read the favorite lines are "She fell right on the train tracks. Unfortunately for her, the south-bound express train was early today. Blood on the train tracks was all that was left of Mary Elizabeth Cotter, age 41."Yeah, I'm odd... |
| Anthem Aeneid chapter 7 . 4/14/2006 So cool! So macabre! I love it! |
| Anthem Aeneid chapter 1 . 4/14/2006 This trailer is awesome. I love how you did that. I feel like I have to keep reading now. |
| Emo Boy chapter 6 . 4/9/2006 Nice, I like that nice, little twist with the hanging by the wire. You should have made her hit the third rail and get electrocuted first though :D |
| mendoza chapter 4 . 4/1/2006 lol thanx charles,so yesterday i helped you put up some pave drawings and you told me to climb a ladder, which happened to be about twenty years old. then when i climed on the top step and it started to shake, you took a step back and said "dont die." glad i could help. your story was awsome tho, the deaths totally unexpected,keep it up. just dont call me david or take any pictures of me |
| Sambo2612 chapter 4 . 3/25/2006 That was ok, not as violent as you made out at the start, but the second death was smart, and the third one was good. *Nearly* as violent as one of my stories :P. Good job. |
| Theatre des Vampires chapter 3 . 3/12/2006 Once again, good, creepy. Give a little more description though. Good beggining. |
| Theatre des Vampires chapter 2 . 3/12/2006 This is good, though thete are a few spelling mistakes. Could be morew descriptive, though. |