Reviews for Momento
GLo chapter 13 . 4/21/2007
wow that was really good kudos to u
Glo chapter 4 . 4/21/2007
ew lol this is addictive
your buddy glo chapter 2 . 4/21/2007
i dont like the bf lol
Ur buddy Glo chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
good trailer i liked it

time to read the rest!
T. K. Ryder chapter 11 . 6/23/2006
OOH! So there were Reapers before Lois! This is good, but seems to be MADE for a movie. It has tons of cliffhangers and lots of description, but no character development whatsoever.

This would be good for a movie, is a good idea, but doesn't really work for a story in my opinion. I would like to see how it ends, though.
jamesbuc chapter 9 . 5/2/2006
Owtch. Painful. :)
Emo Boy chapter 7 . 4/15/2006
The Reaper, eh?
CharlotteMarie chapter 7 . 4/14/2006
Awesome job with this. I was hooked after I read the favorite lines are "She fell right on the train tracks. Unfortunately for her, the south-bound express train was early today. Blood on the train tracks was all that was left of Mary Elizabeth Cotter, age 41."Yeah, I'm odd...
Anthem Aeneid chapter 7 . 4/14/2006
So cool! So macabre! I love it!
Anthem Aeneid chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
This trailer is awesome. I love how you did that. I feel like I have to keep reading now.
Emo Boy chapter 6 . 4/9/2006
Nice, I like that nice, little twist with the hanging by the wire. You should have made her hit the third rail and get electrocuted first though :D
mendoza chapter 4 . 4/1/2006
lol thanx charles,so yesterday i helped you put up some pave drawings and you told me to climb a ladder, which happened to be about twenty years old. then when i climed on the top step and it started to shake, you took a step back and said "dont die." glad i could help. your story was awsome tho, the deaths totally unexpected,keep it up. just dont call me david or take any pictures of me
Sambo2612 chapter 4 . 3/25/2006
That was ok, not as violent as you made out at the start, but the second death was smart, and the third one was good. *Nearly* as violent as one of my stories :P. Good job.
Theatre des Vampires chapter 3 . 3/12/2006
Once again, good, creepy. Give a little more description though. Good beggining.
Theatre des Vampires chapter 2 . 3/12/2006
This is good, though thete are a few spelling mistakes. Could be morew descriptive, though.
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