Charmed.imsure-Always chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
it was as if you took these two different poems and put them together to creat a work of art, extremely unique! I loved it. Never stop writing!
Rozlin chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
this makes me think of... someone. an old friend... I miss her alot.
frayedlifeforce chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
suspenseful - i liked the way you wrote indepthly - very descriptive and some great imagery.
Moonjava chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
Beautiful poem! I love all the depth in it.
Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 4/6/2006
Awesome poem Alex, I love the last line! Finishes the poem perfectly.. Great job!

Much love, Rosanna.

P.S. we should talk soon! _
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
reminds me of a werewolf chase. the suspense, and the eerieness of it. great diction in here. nice work.
Kusje chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
This one spoke to me alot. I love the figurative meanings in this poem.

Very beautiful. Tragic, though.

I loved it.

emilyrachel18 chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
Alex this is amazing! So full of emotion so real. You are gonna have to tell me where this came from! Please contact me soon i'm really worried about you
in theory chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
I like this, so fragile and fiesty all in one bite.
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
Beautiful. The whole thing was something that I could relate to and that just made it more powerful.

Keep it up.
Ahemait chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
it was lonog, but i absolutely loved it. one of your better ones, in my opinion. i liked the lines with the bold letter, emphasizing (cant spell) certain part. awesome
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
This piece is beautiful.

"Her hands shivered from the unwanted touch as warmth cascaded through her emotionless body."

That is beautiful right there.

Keep writing!
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
Speaker For The Live chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
Impressive imagery throughout, I loved this piece. The line "He let her fall, with a sneer spread across his tainted lips." is amazing. The 2 lines directly before it, the punctuation confused me. It was either a typo or intentional, but either way I found it distracted more than added.

Also, I misread it for a minute and thought that it ended with "being". I felt like it was stronger that way than with the title repeated in the final line. "Angel in a Dark Light" is by far your weakest image in the peace, making it an ideal title, but not the strong ending the quality of the piece indicates is coming.

Overall though, bloody amazing, I loved the imagery throughout.