Reviews for One Moment
cloud-shadows chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
sorta like life, right? we only have one life, sort of like one moment, but then not really. Still remember me hopefully... Sorry for not reviewing sooner-last minute school projects and a recurring writer's block took up my time.

Anyways, I like this poem 'cause it reminds me of life. The details are vibrant, visionable (
bright horizon splash chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
a short moment captured so well. great imagery, keep writing!
boys kiss girls chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
Oh wow this is really good! Its really... I'm not sure of the word... empowering? Yep, I'm going with empowering. Great job on this.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
lovely way to set up the tone the gentle breeze was beautiful

keep writing!