|Reviews for Tangible|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
it isn't your best, but I know the need for therapy poetry and I like the ending
| die kleine maus chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
i like how tangible sort of slips into tangle, and everything takes off, or "flies" if you thing with this sort of poetry is it can very easily go over the top, and in the end, despite all the emotion and "angst, simply lose its didn't, it was simple and still all emotional, and i love how you write.
| kit feral chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
"I want to known for me for me, for me. And not for what I did to you." Wow, that's just awesome! Really made me think. I also really really really love "I want to feel tangible- in a tangle of hands and feet and mouths, but reality feels like taking another bitch slap to my brain." Tangible is such an awesome word and tangle goes so well with it. And the reality/slap works perfectly. Amazing work! Never stop writing.