Reviews for Foolish
ossining chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
Well, I think you did a good job of at least making this poetic with the rhyme and rhythm of the piece, but I felt there could have been more images throughout to make the poem a little bit more memorable. Keep writing! :)
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
Love the repition of the title and the questions are great too.. I have totally been in this situation and it sucks a lot...nice piece