Reviews for Betrayed Heart
sensitiveangel chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
Yeah breakups are always hard but you seem to put it best on paper.

I'm sorry I haven't been around much but school has just been so hectic! I put a new poem up; you can review it if you want
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
Well, I don't know how well the rhyme worked here. It seemed a little forced in places. Anyway, keep writing! :)
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
I like the inexact rhyming... very cool.. and I really love that beginning.. again i know how this feels