Reviews for Innocent
Rozlin chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
i don't really like the flow of this one... feels too choppy... seems you haven't added anything new in a while either... Do we all just grow out of it?
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
I'm not sure if I like this.. it's nicely written, but I feel like it needs more
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
Nicely written, good work! Write on!

Anna
Vyvyan chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
I like the sound of it, and the last two lines are brilliant. However, I would like more background information, such as what exactly they think she did and how/if she can prove she's innocent.

But for a short little section, it's beautiful.