Reviews for Tranquility
rage of aquarius chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
You can definitely feel the emotion in this one, and I would like to know the deeper story behind it, which can only be provided if you update! Enticing and tragic both. Thank you for the review you gave to my story, Beneath The Tide-I felt it was such a lovely review that I should return the favor. Off to look at your others now!
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
gaah that was beautiful!that really moved me - not to tears (hahah) but something really close to that effect.

p.s. i love the name Evelyn!
Knightmare Elite chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
Very good intro, I could really feel the emotion from both characters. The beginning felt a little slow, but it soon worked perfectly and continued toward the end. It's interesting to see where this goes, and you've done a wonderful job so far with descriptions and setting.