|Reviews for A Demon Named Chen|
| If.Wishes.Came.True chapter 8 . 5/18/2006
Omg, I absolutley love your story! Especially Chen...I now know what my dream man will be like, lol. I can't wait for the next chapter...I think I could manage a cookie or two if it comes out soon lol.
| BlackLioness chapter 8 . 5/13/2006
again, a fantastic update - it's slowed down a bit, but the characters are gaining more depth with their emotions.
Chen gets better each chapter, i love him! he's a great character and i'd love to steal him for a while... hehe! lol :P
wow, Rose is really mad... i look forward to the next update, i can't wait to see what she does and how she handles this!
| pianomasterette chapter 8 . 5/13/2006
Good update m'dear! And hm..I suppose laughing would work there too..maybe.. -shrugs-. Anywho, I enjoyed this chapter very much. I really hope Rose kicks Shivra's daughter's ass.. -dark chuckle- We shall see! Good update !
| pianomasterette chapter 7 . 4/22/2006
Whoot! A quick review! -applauds wildly- Brava! Oh, but I would just like to point out one teeny tiny mistake.
You said, "Chen dropped down beside her and cradled her in his arms as she continued to laugh."
And I believe you meant to say cry rather than laugh, is that correct? Otherwise, god job! More updates!
| BlackLioness chapter 7 . 4/21/2006
first, a hundred apologies for not reviewing - i just never found the time to. the last two chapers have been fantastic, the start of chapter 5 really had me on the edge of my managed to create tension very nicely there with Rose's mother.
I love the teasing between Chen and Rose - in fact, i love chen! he's a great character and just the sort of guy i'd like to have as my protector.
then the tension built up again when Chen went down to the kitchen - you're a very good writer, to be able to completely change the feel of the story so quickly.
and then with Rose's mother... *gasp* i love that you didn't make Rose all accepting of what happened, it makes the story so much more realisitic that she really grieves for her, not just continueing on with the story.
good ending to the chapter as well, it was a good point to stop. it's left me waiting for more - so please update quickly!
| helena chapter 7 . 4/21/2006
ohh wow soo cool!i luv chen!i could lock him in my basement!*makes shifty eyes at chen and grins evily*
nyway this is really good:D
luv hell x
| thinkingink chapter 7 . 4/21/2006
oh wicked! i love this story, you write really well :) :)
| pianomasterette chapter 6 . 4/20/2006
WHAT? WHAT THE FUCK! YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT OFF IN SUSPENSE LIKE THAT! AH God damnit... no more writers block! Update now!
| pianomasterette chapter 5 . 4/9/2006
O It's rose isn't it? Rose is Shivra's heir? Oh man this is good. heh, I really like your story so far..and I'm definatly gonna keep an eye on this one. Keep up the good word m'dear! And update soon!
| BlackLioness chapter 5 . 4/9/2006
great chapter, very good bit at the end - you've got me very curious now, and i can't wait to see what develops with the girl from Earth.
i'm wondering if it will be who i think it is... but i'll wait and see if i'm right.
this story is developing wonderfully, it's interesting and i love reading it. great job, i can't wait for the next update.
| BlackLioness chapter 4 . 3/19/2006
aw, so sweet. he carries her home. :)will he ever be ordered to do something against Rose? Thor didn't seem too happy with his disappearences in chapter always, this was a great chapter and i can' wait to read more.
| Ayumi Fallassion chapter 3 . 3/8/2006
*snickers* I love this kid, he's so cute! *Glomps Chen* Can I have him for a while? I'll give him back in, well, 'ok' shape!
I love your story, keep up the work!
| BlackLioness chapter 3 . 3/7/2006
i really like this so far. it's very well written, and i love your writing style!what will happen between Chen and Rose? i love the joking and talking, it makes the story very real.i look forward to reading more.
| IneGase chapter 2 . 3/5/2006
It's really good, not demonic or gory at all! This little friendship is quite interesting, and the teasing/fooling around foreshadows a romantic/unhealthy relationship. It's very creative, keep it up. Don't make me disappointed!
| IneGase chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
I like it; it's mysterious and bittersweet. I must say, this sounds like the beginning of a horror story...