Reviews for Respite
Stardust'n'Wanderlust chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
Cutting furrows\Like the plough in the field.\I will sow my sorrow\And my pain there,\Watch it blossom\Into a cure for this\Black abyss

I like the simile there, makes me visualize...*shiver and rub wrist*

I don't know how it feels like, so I won't judge you, but I hope you won't feel like doing that again!

(I know that sounds kind of naive, :-D)
Nille chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
That sounds so...exact! You've really captured the feeling...I hope you wont do it again, though you'll feel like it!
Cheyenne Kai chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
powerful imagery