Reviews for Oops
FireBreathingBeast chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
you write the truth with every Jesus!-samantha
samwise606 chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
Responding to the review directly below this one:

Good call, Searchlight, and thanks. I'll be taking the necessary steps to rectify that error on my part.-Samwise
searchlight chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
Pretty good, but I hope you don't think He is literally sacrificed again every time you sin (which is what Catholics think) because He did say "It is finished." Anyway, other than that I know precisely what you mean. Sin is gross. I'll keep praying for you!

-check 'unending' out BTW

-Searchlight
bahaghari chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
I can't express how much I liked this poem... because I can relate to the sentimentalities herein.

And it vaguely reminded me of a britney-song "Oops, I did it again..." bleh.

he he, don't like her but i've been on that stage where i thought she's the prettiest girl that existed. this is really out of the topic, ne?

Keep writing.
Needa S chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
We aren't perfect, so naturally we are going to sin. Thankfully we have a forgiven God. Awesome job! God Bless ya and keep on writing.
Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
This was a really good poem, I enjoyed it, the language was used well and the structure really suited it, very good.

Keep writing!

Alan.