|Reviews for Kings of the World|
| Mad Frog Rasputin chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
This is really good
| Stardust'n'Wanderlust chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
a bitter sort of humor at the end, i like this, please write more!
sorry for the noobish typing; i guess i'm getting lazy after writing my poems like that.
| crazy dog events chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
My only complaint is your use of the word 'orbs,' which, due to its overuse on fictionpress, has become one of my least favorite words. Ever. At least you didn't use as a substitute for 'eyes.'
Egh. other than that, it's quite good.