Reviews for Chance
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
This reminds me of a sunrise and the rarities you are able to see in life if you take a chance. beautiful
are you from mejico chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
I'm always happy when haikus have something to do with nature and are good too. I feel like running outside now and tasting this dew.
Jacqueline Stem chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
I like it- especially the d's. One thing though, why is it called Chance?
xWhit3StaRx chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
One word: Nice _

Jade
Aquafied chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
i am hard pressed to find a single main street, but a vast amount

especially in the expense for happinessbut that costs around 60 dollars, as advertised
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
beautiful! what else can I say?
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
I like how it explores and notices all of these little mundane things that normally would just fade into the backdrop. Well done.

Much love,Juliet.
Spootasia Tomoe chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
also very nice. very easy to read, very serene. i quite liked this. you have a skill with this form. i enjoyed the way you carried the letter 'd' throughout it. was it purposeful? it made it feel very solid and symmetrical.
classic violet chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
so vivid, yet so simple and so beautiful.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
quite a abstract hiaku nicely done

keep writing!
Needa S chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
Very nice, excellent job.