Reviews for Poetic Prideland
Niels Stegeman chapter 1 . 2/5/2007
A beautiful visualization of poetry, simply breathtaking. Almost melancholy imagery makes this a beautiful poem. I commend you and thank you for all the reviews. Truly appreciated.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 3 . 2/3/2007
Really like the nature motif, and the fierce presence of green and beauty.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 2 . 2/3/2007
Quite nice.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
Ah meaningful - speaks to my heart.
WonderWing chapter 3 . 1/29/2007
Loved these poems, so simple and understanding. No time is wasted with erroneous details as you deliver the reader directly to the attached emotion. Really vivid :D
Moondog Dozier chapter 2 . 5/23/2006
"a new step, twice forward", is marvelous phrase work. I like the use of "Moon vanishes", as I am partial to the moon, and it creates a sense of mystery in this work. Last line really gives this a great conclusion. Good work.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
I like the title and its use in the work. The interesting semi- contradiction of "For it belongs to us-but does not-because we are it and it is us", works so well to capture the situation. Excellent.
boys kiss girls chapter 2 . 3/9/2006
I like this one too. It reminds me of Rainer Maria Rilke's works. (Thats a good thing)
boys kiss girls chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
I like the formatting style. And... I take it you wear glasses? *high five*
crazy dog events chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
Mh. i would love to see more.
Drops of Jewpiter chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
great poem. i love the first line 'this poetic prideland' good job :)dropsofjewpiter