Love how the story is going, especially how the ends are twists that place her in such awkward situations. Her reaction are the best, she speaks without thinking then gets embarassed about what she does, seems te world ha conspired against her for some reason but it i still fun to see what she does...

The chapter was especially funny, i loved how his attempt to make her feel awkward backfired against him.

-screams like a hyperactive maniac-

Go you.

You are my hero.

Really.

xD

I like how you've written this one, it's so cliche, yet it's so ... like -that.-

Yeah. That.

Update soon!

I like the way you end off each chapter - just keeps readers wanting to read more :) I like the interaction between the main character (I realized that you've never stated her name before so I'm guessing that's next chapter) and the guys you introduced. Silver eyes are so HOT! And he does sound horny. I liked the 'debates' thing, made me laugh because I just had one very heated debate a few months ago and I still remember the details very clearly. Anyhow, I guess the only thing I have to criticize is the shortness of the chapters... though I guess short chapters are easier to read than long ones.

Oh, I absolutely love how Silver Eyes fooled the main character and how she didn't realize he's her new neighbour. Nice twist, I must say :) so yup, I like the story line so far even though it's cliched. Who doesn't need a few cliches in her life anyway? Haha, update soon, it's good so far!

Lmao, you have got to update this!

Hahaha that poor girl's really not having the best day, is she?

Hope you'll keep it up. I like it! Can't wait for more!

- LL

HeeHee! Great set of characters so far!

Weird hot guy...what more can a girl ask for! lol. Great story!

Wow this story is so good!

Anders is so cool! Reminds me of someone at my school.. so annoying... ;D

Please update!

I like the way that you start each line for each new thought, although I do think your "heroine" is a bit too feisty.. also reminds me of a close friend... gods your characters are so.. lifelike! :D

Again, please update!

you've got an interesting story going here

cool story do continue.

Wow, this is amazingly good, your descriptions of the boy, and just kinda the way the narrator speaks. I like her/your style. Off to read the REST of your works...!

Also, since I can't contact you any other way, thank you for reviewing my stuff. I was really glad to see your comments and what you thought of it.

~ Chiclets, a.k.a Steph

yo gal! ur story rox ok? update them often. i believe a lot of ppl wan to read them

Ha. I love the guy, he sounds like such an arrogant prick that it's funny. Great start, I'd love to read more.

Oh nice work. I love the tension between the two, but to tell you the truth, the boy's cockyness really appeals to me. More more more beauty. :)