Reviews for The Danger in Loving
WyrdWolf chapter 1 . 7/1/2006
Prepare for an inbox flood, my vixen!

Wow, that must have really inspired you. This was a good poem-I especially like the part near the middle about the cold and the thickest blankets cannot restore the heat. That was totally awesome. Sweet!
empathic life chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
I bow to your almight poem-writing-power. *bowbowbow* We mere mortals are unworthy to witness such skill. Yes. Well. Very good poem. Romeo and Juliet'll do that to you. Nice ending. Very powerful. Don't get too good, Felicia darling, or people'll only read your work and not the rest of ours!
thursdays and rain chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
lovelove the last part..

in theory chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
Mm I'm loving your formatting/style approach, it's so...different. Fresh.

(and your bio made me giggle)
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
Wonderful movement and flow. It rushes on with the short line length. "only to feel that first kiss-one-last-time", is a marvelous, if not tragically appropriate ending.
sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
I love how you ended it so tragically, but that's the way it's suppose to be. Romeo and Juliet is quite an inspiration to poets everywhere. I actually think i wrote a piece myself after watching it. Beautiful poem as always

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