|Reviews for the tempest before|
| emsworth chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
another one that is just about perfect- a twisting buildup to an absolutely wonderful ending. not just the end, dammit! everything
| Neverlander12 chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
Sounds like every evening to me (except for the literal rain). This one is so muted and slow (neither in a bad way; such a good way *grin*). Perfect.
| Alessandra Lee chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
Lovely. I like the way that it isn't overly descriptive, but you still get the feeling across.
| grim-dreamer chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
Beautiful use of enjambement and the subject matter so vague that it could apply to more than just one feeling or scene. To me the poem spoke of an apprehension, and the fact the narrator voices being 'unready' sounded ominous. This is a familiar scene that has become darkly atmospheric. Interesting use of alliteration, however, the word 'gradients' is unusual and may seem to be trying too hard to add weight to the poem? Otherwise not a bad poem at all.
| sloppy firsts chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
M...It's almost exotic.
| candyaddict chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
seems very everyday diary-entry like. a nice change from my usual reads. write on!
| mothling chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
For being about a very average thing, verry nice and succinct. Good job.