Reviews for to those caught in colour
emsworth chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
i love you i love you i love you i love you i love you my darling how do you manage to be so brilliant and yet write so much please do not stop writing it would be sacreligious and as papuma would say, "a wicked waste of good talent". or, as i say, great talent. i love you!
Neverlander12 chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
It's so vivid.I feel like I'm right there in the scene. It's wonderful. Made me smile in a sad way. :P

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Sir Trafford Leigh-Mallory chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
the ambigiouty of the poem (which seems to be a theme) is effective. There is intense imagery that i enjoyed, the underlying or even overlying political message appealed to me personally, the portrayal of squalor as well. A good poem in that various people can take what they want out of it.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
Wonderful use of vibrancy. The theme sneaks in throughout well. Last line was excellent. Well written.
hey maria chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
"her eyes beady/And greedy for a smile"

Bizarre images, powerful meaning. I love it.