Reviews for The Prophecy of Gemma William: TGBHYB
SarahJaneDrkAngl05 chapter 5 . 7/26/2006
getting good cant wait to read more! update soon!

SarahJane
Muted Dragon chapter 5 . 7/11/2006
haha, yes, humans misinterpret. forget to carry the one. aw that's it for now i guess. *pops out of existence*
Muted Dragon chapter 4 . 7/11/2006
i wonder if there's unemployment services or severance pay or welfare for those poor men under Zarquin. *reading on* o tragedy. yay.
Muted Dragon chapter 3 . 7/11/2006
i love the tone of this. it's fresh and upbeat and comical (i'm in the comical mood *reading pratchett*). oh a female head. like a female director on NCIS. sry, in a relating sort of mood. anyway, i'll keep reading now.
Teana chapter 4 . 6/12/2006
Tis a tad short, but ya better keep writing
AlaskanNativeAngel chapter 3 . 4/30/2006
That definitely got more interesting. So the whole thing started early? Not just her being born? Cool!
a reader chapter 3 . 4/30/2006
the story is nice but your sentences are a bit choppy, and not really smooth. pls get more out, its interesting
BloodedBane chapter 3 . 4/30/2006
Unique, and pretty cool
AlaskanNativeAngel chapter 2 . 4/30/2006
I would definitely keep reading this if you updated.
AlaskanNativeAngel chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
Wow that was a great beginning! It totally got me interested in the rest of the story! Update soon, please?
JesterKing'sPawn chapter 2 . 4/13/2006
this story sounds cool so far, update soon!
SarahJaneDrkAngl05 chapter 2 . 4/5/2006
cant wait to read more update soon!

SarahJane
SarahJaneDrkAngl05 chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
sounds interesting and im intreaged so i think i shall read on. keep up the good work!

SarahJane
Muted Dragon chapter 2 . 3/16/2006
What next? Can she kick butt yet? She gonna die and get reincarnated in line 100 years or something? *tries to sit still and watch*
Strategeus chapter 2 . 3/8/2006
A wonderful beginning! The ideas flow nicely, though the transitions could use a bit of improvement and a few supplemental details could be added. Still in all, this is a superb start to what will be a fine tale. The idea is fresh and new, and Terry Pratchett would be proud. :) Incidentally, I love you!
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