|Reviews for The Prophecy of Gemma William: TGBHYB|
| breana chapter 2 . 3/8/2006
...Interesting. I like it, the idea and all, anyway. I think... you might need to work on presentation, detail, etc. Help us know the culture. Help us understand the way they think. But I do like the idea- and that's half the battle right there. Good job!
| breana chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Interesting idea. I like that the savior was... wrong. haha. But I also look forward to how you have the savior save them when the destruction hasn't occured yet. But like I said, it seems like an ineresting starting idea.
| Lady Silver fang chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
Wow! That was good so far! I want chapter one!
| Adaku chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
Nice story so far! I can't wait to found out what happens next. _