|Reviews for Deep red Gashes|
| dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
hm, i really like this one because it's so blunt & i like how it speaks out against other people doing it & still internal fighting as well. really nice.
| The Melancholy Cocoa Bean chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
i can really relate to this piece ... your ideas are displayed beautifully. and everything about this poem is so true: 'its so not nice to see deep red gashes on your arm' -keep it up!