Reviews for exchange
ossining chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
I love the line "that spring will rise green and golden" because the use of color is awesome. The 2nd line of the poem also has some great alliteration. Great work. Keep writing! :)
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
pretty imagery good work!

keep writing!
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
soft and fantasy like.