Incredible. The emotions you express in the story really come through. I enjoyed it a lot. I still don't know if I did or didn't like the shockingly sudden switch of scenery and storyline, let me think about that.

Oh, weird! I've just written a disturbing piece about cellos myself. It reminds me of Disney's "The Haunted Mansion" only way cooler. I love your choice of words and the way you create mood. Reminds me of something I might write. You are very talented and eloquent in expressing yourself.