Reviews for at the loom
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
Favorite line: "My skin is my fabric is you." Such a simple statement, but it has so much power. This is such a great metaphor. Wonderful job. It's very original, and you were able to keep the thought going throughout the entire poem, without it losing meaning. Keep writing! :)
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
'click of meeting needles, ' never thought of that comparison to love before, but you expanded it in such a way that it was breathtaking. Beautiful. (looks at your profile and blushes)
myno chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
fantastic last stanza.