Reviews for Winter Driveway Stars
Tipped chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
That is my favorite thing to do. Whenever I can I do that- lay on my driveway in the cold night.

This poem was very simple, but it described the feeling wonderfully.

If anybody reading this hasn't actually done this, this poem will make them want to.

It is truly one of the greatest feelings.

Good job.
Luma chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
Oh, incredible. Just wonderful!'I stay silent. The world seems stilled.' LovelyAnd 'I close my eyes, almost against my will. I feel blissfull and childlike' simply know, I love watching the stars and when I read this, I could imagine that it was me lying there watching. You describe the feeling, the emotions, so accurately. Very well done!

And I must thank you for your reviews. They are the best, the very best. And I mean it. Thank you.

Keep writing!

-Lisa
Simon James chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
Wow. Loverly.

Thanks for your review. I'm glad you did, coz i got to read this.. my kinda poetry.. really descriptive of feeling

'blissful and childlike' a wonderful thought.

I like that you were lying on the pavement. Not many people do, i guess... its kindof incongruous - you expect lying on grass, or maybe even a bed, but on pavement? now there's a poem worth reading.

ChiKApow.

Simon