Reviews for vocal breakdown
simpleplan13 chapter 7 . 5/23/2006
I like this.. especially the beginning and the last word.. great piece
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X chapter 7 . 5/20/2006
Wonderful write. Love this series.
ADSpencer chapter 7 . 5/9/2006
This collection is so...so...awesome. Your poems are the best. Awesome job.
oops heartbreak chapter 7 . 5/9/2006
Incredibly inspirational, poetically beautiful.
sunday night sky chapter 7 . 5/3/2006
this made me want to cry. beautiful.
astral boy chapter 6 . 4/30/2006
oh, i think i love this. the last line, just, 'i don't.' helped and hurt and the same time. glagh. have to favourite this now.
she's not breathing chapter 7 . 4/30/2006
this collection has an amazing concept. i love it. personally, i feel number 6 drifted a little from that. it was more - stable, in a way. the rest of these poems have a fluid animation to them. lovely work.

kait
Aquafied chapter 7 . 4/30/2006
seems lonely and

maybe vigorousbut i am too cold to feel
simpleplan13 chapter 6 . 4/7/2006
interesting.. i like the format
mezzie chapter 6 . 4/2/2006
i like how it's divided and still all somehow makes sense, in my brain anyway i think it does. it's like snapping my arm into the air and coming back with strange words dripping in my hands. which is very very much a good thing.

mezzie
White Tea and Ginger chapter 6 . 4/1/2006
love this, so simple with just the right amount of kick.
poetic abortion chapter 6 . 4/1/2006
the whole thing *hauts* me, it is all things we want but never have and -

jesus, it is so pretty.

* noelle
account not in use chapter 6 . 4/1/2006
little flashes of love, life, heartbreak...

'dear tragedy,/i am not sorry' that's sticking with me.
Aquafied chapter 6 . 4/1/2006
seems very personalizedodd description

but i couldnt think of anything else
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X chapter 6 . 4/1/2006
I love this one! Written very well. Keep it up, as usual.
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