Reviews for a slap in the eye
Leo Eigenmann chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
Wow, nice descriptions you've got there. Thanks for reviewing my poem in German. Try reading my stories when you've got some time.
emsworth chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
this is just about as perfect as anything you've ever done. not a word wasted anywhere.."it could be summarized in a pupil"...wow. i'm jealous! but very happy that i get to read you
Neverlander12 chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
It's so smooth and perfect. I love it.

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Alessandra Lee chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
Wonderful. I especially liked the repetition of the word see.