Reviews for Untitled Love Poem
Misguided Youth chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
Everytime I read this I get goosebumps. Keep up the good work baby!
Swift Ravenwood chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
I really liked the way that you began this poem in a way that summarized it - I haven't seen that done much. Since you wanted constructice criticism, I'm not too sure about the use of brackets; for me it kind of broke up the flow of the poem. Anyway, it's a great poem, so keep up the good work!

Swift Ravenwood
nofaceme chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
aw. very cute. I have totally felt this way. Good job. Keep it up!