|Reviews for Treason's Warrior|
| Catapulting Cantaloupes chapter 4 . 4/25/2006
This is interesting so far. I definitely can see why your main character, Isabel of the Shadows, talks in 1st person. She's just like you. Oh, and I really like your names you come up with. Jessamine Softfire... quite creative. Keep writing, the story has a lot of potential. (Is Tavis by any chance based off of cough, Jack Schmitt, cough?)
| Cat Townsend chapter 4 . 4/22/2006
ACK! UPDATE SOON!I like Blade... he's really cool... Uh, there are a couple of points, though, like where you used There instead of their, and where you omitted a couple of helper verbs, or the word "the"... otherwise it's really good! like I said, ACK UPDATE SOON!
| littlecelticwitch chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Very good so far, but everytime you mean write 'our', you spell it 'are'. 'Are' is the plural version of 'is'. 'Our' is belonging. That is the word you want to use