Reviews for Just a Fuck
Robin Siskin chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
I like repetition, but this was too much. Throughout the whole thing, all you're saying is "uh, yeah this chick feels worthless now 'cause this dude raped her, and she had a life and stuff, but now she doesn't. Yeah." But hey, even that wouldn't be half bad if you had some content in the poem other than that, but you didn't. Poems should represent a single emotion or idea, yes, but writing the same thing over and over but with different words isn't what makes a good poem, especially if your pacing is all wrong.