Reviews for You Will Never Have Me
a lonely september chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
its commanding you to hurt hurt hurt and hurt and then it's 'you will never have me' i love that. it's a great poem.
Vyvyan chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
Hmm...is this meant to be a song? The lines themselves are very nice and flow within their own seperate ideas, but in the full poem, it seems to be slightly disjointed.