|Reviews for Little China Girl|
| chinese person chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Don't worry, if you actually go to China you will find that most little girls there are very spoiled and pampered.
| InspirASIAN chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
Thanks for the review.
I agree. And how can some people be so cruel as to give up their child if not a boy?
| Absynthe Greene chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
hm...I don't quite understand...
| Jason J. Ross chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
I am glad that you become a teacher. The children will benefit greatly from such a compassionate person. I hope you continue to bring attention to the plight of the suffering. It is noble to be a voice for those that cannot be heard.
| lxpetrik chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
I like this. If you wouldn;'t have said what this was about I wouldn't have understood, but I can feel the anger and distaste in this. Sometimes the fewer the words the more powerful they are. I also think it's ironic how you use a Japanese form of poetry to convay your dislike of a Chinese way of life. Lol, that's irony for you.
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
marvellous poem. very poigmant and well voiced!
| Nicole Alexander chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
so simple, yet so beautiful. it makes you really want to think about these things going on in china.
by the way, thanks for the review. the first chapter is just physical descriptions of the characters and what packs they belong to, since there are so many wolves. You don't need to read it, but it is something nice to flip back to.
anyway, beautiful poem.
| classic violet chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
extremely well done. beautiful.
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
sweet little haiku(?), i like the topic. i can't write about anything except the fucked up things in life, so i admire this.
| The Melancholy Cocoa Bean chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
this poem is so sweet and sad ... im not really in to haikus but this one is great and makes me think alot. (thanks for reviewing my poem - and 'through out' is not a typo - 'through' 'thru' in england!
| eden is burning chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
I'm not really a haiku person, but you are converting me. It's a depressing and true situation, nicely done in such a short space.
| Embellished Heart chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Sad but true situation unfortunatly. The poem really captures the sadness of the whole thing.~Dana
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Sad, true, but sad. Well written.
| ChasingPerfection chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
"Once so full of life" sounds as if she is dead...I have a feeling that is what you meant for it to say. But it sounds overal very judgemental to me, which is counterproductive to a haiku. But you did post it under politics...heh, yay for oximorons! political haiku...anyway maybe it's just because I'm so biased (you know me and Asia) but I don't really like this piece.
| multiples of six chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
To me this seems to be about an aborted child. It's very powerful taken that way.