Reviews for horizon
just dani chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
i love your poems. most of them are so short and simple, but full of meaning...and still leaving room for imagination. You leave the reader still thinking...very lovely. keep writing

us*A
XX Bleeding Crystal XX chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
Lovely, simply lovely. You're simply marvelous with haikus. You find the exact words to portray the feelings I think we all have (hence so many reviews), and people can strongly can relate to this. Simple, but still full of meaning to everyone, with a different meaning to each one. Charming.

XOXO

Ka. Leb.
Red Vision chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
beautiful...
Aquafied chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
and fallpessimism lives on, we are all a little bit

more of quite a bit
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
beautiful. "frayed skyline" is infectiously cute and beautiful, pretty.

* noelle
Infinity Plus One chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
Beautiful! Thank you for the review BTw.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Very visual in the abstraction. Good work.
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
I like especially how you used 'frayed'in this.
Ashes.to.Acid chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Short, but incredibly good as always. I feel a sense of freedom in this.
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Deliciously sweet. Great mood here, so free and hopeful. I love the phrase 'frayed skyline'.
MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
That is beautiful!

xoxo
run rabbit run chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
short and sweet. nice
crazy dog events chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
It feels like there should be an 'and somewhere before 'fly.' it feels weird otherwise. Quite wonderful, other than that, though.
Alison Wright chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Oh I am with you there. Short and sweet.