Reviews for horizon
just dani chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
i love your poems. most of them are so short and simple, but full of meaning...and still leaving room for imagination. You leave the reader still thinking...very lovely. keep writing

XX Bleeding Crystal XX chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
Lovely, simply lovely. You're simply marvelous with haikus. You find the exact words to portray the feelings I think we all have (hence so many reviews), and people can strongly can relate to this. Simple, but still full of meaning to everyone, with a different meaning to each one. Charming.


~Ka. Leb.
Red Vision chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
Aquafied chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
and fallpessimism lives on, we are all a little bit

more of quite a bit
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
beautiful. "frayed skyline" is infectiously cute and beautiful, pretty.

~* noelle
Infinity Plus One chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
Beautiful! Thank you for the review BTw.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Very visual in the abstraction. Good work.
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
I like especially how you used 'frayed'in this. chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Short, but incredibly good as always. I feel a sense of freedom in this.
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Deliciously sweet. Great mood here, so free and hopeful. I love the phrase 'frayed skyline'.
MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
That is beautiful!

run rabbit run chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
short and sweet. nice
crazy dog events chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
It feels like there should be an 'and somewhere before 'fly.' it feels weird otherwise. Quite wonderful, other than that, though.
Alison Wright chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Oh I am with you there. Short and sweet.