|Reviews for said epiphany:|
| FireShye chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
Wow, this is beautiful. The whole thing is just... wow. You have a gift, my friend. :)
| noctema chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
this is too close.
| she left ringing in his head chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
fantastic, completely amazing.
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
Ok. I don't know if I've ever read a poem more beautiful than this one, and honestly, I've read a lot. There are many talented writers on fictionpress, but I can truly say that this piece outweighs any I've read.
The first two lines left me speechless. As someone else said, I dream about writing poetry as beautiful and as moving as this.
The constellation/star reference left me breathless.
And the last two lines
left me wanting more.
You have IMMENSE talent. I'd love for you to review some of my work and give me opinions/feedback. It would mean a lot.
I'm going to keep my eye out for you!
| hicetnunc chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
wow， nice ：）
| Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
I swear, my jaw dropped after I read the first two lines, which became even more open after the second stanza.
Really, just amazing. "collapsed bone structure" your word structure is brilliant.
| Jezsh chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
I love the first two and last two lines best. The imagery is so delicate and beautiful but also almost sickly. Beautifully written.
| abstractelysium chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
This is the kind of stuff I dream of writing.
| SarahJaneDrkAngl05 chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
once again another good one!
| Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
I love the poem, and I love the title even more.
| empathic life chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
I wonder what inspires you.
| a lonely september chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
oh wow. this is great. i love the way it's written, the topic is great too.
| life intimidates art chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
this is completely amazing.
| dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 3/15/2006
Those opening lines are so coldly elegant, so poignant, and - almost eerie, I think.
| crinkled aster ribbon chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
lovely and poignant. innocently beautiful.