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![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow, i loved that...it was really good :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this. It was really really cool. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Just wow. You've captured this so perfectly that no one could belive you didn't go through this yourself. You are, in short, amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was a very powerful and emotional story and I loved every minute of it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, the rutheless tendencies of the teenage mind... I love how you can sense that the main character cares so deeply for not only her parents but her siblings, although she expresses it with disgust. I also loved the impact of holding back tears. This was a powerful, emotional piece and I loved it. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() angsty teenaged breakdown is always entertaining. this was a great read. brilliant job. loved it. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Like it? It's amazing, I love it. I love how you watch their thought processes unfold in front of your eyes, how it folds in pieces of the past, of what would make them resolution not to broken, but not wanted to. To try to hold out, to say "I'll be gone next time, it won't happen" but somehow is amazingly written. *Bows* You are an amazing author |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved this version of an angsty teenage breakdown. you caught the feelings so well, i've had my share of these, and it was very nostalgic reading this, as you wrote it so well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() teen angsty, yes, but in a way, its more like troubledif that makes any sense, i like this. it is common, but that doesnt mask the brilliant take on it. i had a bad day though, i cant channel my anger so straight |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. . . I like. Makes my skin crawl. Everyone loves a good angsty-teenage breakdown now and then. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah. This is SO sad. I really hope it's not true. OMG. SO sad. I had tears through out the whole thing you wanna know something? I'm one of those people who "doesn't believe in crying." Amazing job. Just breath taking. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good. i felt like i was the character |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is good, almost real. I like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() god... ...i can't imagine you just imagining this. it's sad that you should understand something like this so well...but it makes for damn good writing, especially from a good writer. |