Reviews for Help
their wingless angel chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
oh wow, i loved was really good :]
xAngel of SorrowX chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
I liked this. It was really really cool. _
Absynthe Greene chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
Wow. Just wow. You've captured this so perfectly that no one could belive you didn't go through this yourself. You are, in short, amazing.
gbheart chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
it was a very powerful and emotional story and I loved every minute of it
Chaotic0ne chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
Ah, the rutheless tendencies of the teenage mind... I love how you can sense that the main character cares so deeply for not only her parents but her siblings, although she expresses it with disgust. I also loved the impact of holding back tears. This was a powerful, emotional piece and I loved it. Keep it up.
she wants revenge chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
angsty teenaged breakdown is always entertaining. this was a great read. brilliant job. loved it.
for what its worth chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
SliversofSilverPain chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
Like it? It's amazing, I love it. I love how you watch their thought processes unfold in front of your eyes, how it folds in pieces of the past, of what would make them resolution not to broken, but not wanted to. To try to hold out, to say "I'll be gone next time, it won't happen" but somehow is amazingly written. *Bows* You are an amazing author
a lonely september chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
i loved this version of an angsty teenage breakdown. you caught the feelings so well, i've had my share of these, and it was very nostalgic reading this, as you wrote it so well.
Aquafied chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
teen angsty, yes, but in a way, its more like troubledif that makes any sense, i like this.

it is common, but that doesnt mask the brilliant take on it.

i had a bad day though, i cant channel my anger so straight
Natalie Harker chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Oh. . . I like. Makes my skin crawl. Everyone loves a good angsty-teenage breakdown now and then.
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Ah. This is SO sad. I really hope it's not true. OMG. SO sad. I had tears through out the whole thing you wanna know something? I'm one of those people who "doesn't believe in crying." Amazing job. Just breath taking.
angelfelicity chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
very good. i felt like i was the character
Dayelle Ann chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
This is good, almost real. I like it.
Goblin Coffee Shop chapter 1 . 3/8/2006

...i can't imagine you just imagining this. it's sad that you should understand something like this so well...but it makes for damn good writing, especially from a good writer.