Reviews for The Cycle Which I Didn't Mean to Write
old unhappy far-away things chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
This is beautiful. It reminds me of a dream I had.
And All That Could Have Been chapter 1 . 10/18/2006
Beautiful.
goddessofmoondreams chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
Powerful imagery-it's disturbing, I like it.
Olusenka chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
The last part is, in my opinion, the most effective segment of this poem. The imagery is gorgeous and I can almost experience the feel of it since you sommunicate it so well. Fantastic metaphors, a really solid piece of effort. Good on you for posting.
Phoenix Down chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
even if you regret posting this, I'm glad you did- because this is probebly the best piece of poetry I've ever read at Fictionpress. It was a poem with siginificance. It was strung together well, with meaning and imagery. I really do, absolutely, find beauty in this. Thank you.