Reviews for My First Poem
RandomUser674 chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
This is SO creepy! This EXACTLY describes MY first meaningful poem I wrote when I was ten. Mine was on purple construction paper and hung on the board. It's five years later, and... wow, it's like we're in parallel universes. I had no friends, did no sports, didn't dance, yet I wrote poetry. I'm ranting, but it's so weird that this describes my first poem as well as yours. Wow. [end rant]
die kleine maus chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
i love how you so easily convey exactly what you want, especially in the last few 's no point in me trying to describe your style, i'm sure you're quite familiar with it, but it's brilliant.
Moosher chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
Aw! This is adorable.. I love the simple diction and the great flow. As well as the fab ending..amazing writing.. Keep it up!

Skittle Trees Exist chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
A pen,

Some paper

A brain,

And that was enough.