i likee this :)

you should definitely continues asap!

oo-lala I'm really curious about what's going to happen next! Good Job!

this is good - why haven't you updated in a while?

I love your story. It's just what I need, a fun, summer love story. But try being a little more descriptive you know? less dialouge

this is a great story. I like the interaction between Jeremy and Claudia. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Great start so far, please continue...

It sounds quite interesting, good work so far.