|Reviews for firefly|
| Recovery From Death chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
I just chased fireflies a few weeks ago... :) this reminds me of it so much.
| just dani chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
| run rabbit run chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
very sweet. i can almost feel it.
| citrus scented chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
dash..that word really brings it to life. really great choice of words- it works so well.
| gnimrodd chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
reminds me of summer nights; imagery- short and simple, wonderful.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
every summer i go down to Maryland to visit my niece and we try to capture fireflies and the scene is alwas painted so; aka you make me remeber things that, otherwise, were irrelevant.
| Jezsh chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
| MidnightStar005 chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
wow it's so dark but light all at the same time. i like the contrast. nice work.
| theory of black chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
This is really cute. We dont have fireflies where I live, but I still think they'd be awesome to see.
Thanks for all the reviews )
| White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
pretty. like love.
| bright horizon splash chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
Simple and gorgeous, i love it! reminds me of my haiku, "glow." they would fit together nicely too!
| chaos called creation chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
This reminds me of Thumbelina. You know that Disney movie? it reminded me of that. The scene that came to mind was where they were having one of the musical sequences with the firefly prince (or fairy prince)? My memory is failing me. Great imagery though, you could expand this quite well if you wanted too, because you are one of those imagerous writers, but it's a fine haiku. Keep writing :)
| nofaceme chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
I love haiku. I really liked the last line in this one. Keep it up.
| Needa S chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
Beautiful, awesome write.