Reviews for Pretty Boys and Pretty Girls |
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![]() ![]() ![]() WAH! you updated! i do so aDORE this story. it's gorgeous. i want to sleep with all the characters. this was... DRAMATIC! christ, kendra, carrior, justin... & poor cyril bewildered in the midst of it all. one thing i don't get... sylvester was at school right? or was he just picking cyril up? i just didn't get the "freshly laid" bit... but maybe that's just my wishful thinking that sylvester would never cheat on cyril darling... ok i'm not making ANY SENSE but my god, please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *jaw drops* WHAT THE HELL? Did Syv really sleep with Carrion? That can't be right. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw... We're all so busy since it's almost the end of the school year. S'ok, I haven't even uploaded anything all week. No, you're awesome and this chappie... is delicious! *licks story* O.o PLOT TWIST! *catches breath* So, let me get this straight, Sylv slept with Kendra and now he's sleeping with Carrion? Dubyu Tee Ehf! Yes, this is very soap opera-ish. I used to watch soap operas, but I don't anymore. I'll have to read it again to make a full critique. *reads* Nothing is there to critique! This chappie is so deliciously perfect and very angsty indeed. I'm wondering what will happen next. Oh me, oh my. Good luck on the next one! *huggles and cream puffs* |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD! i... wow. this is omg so so so good! wait. i mean bad. no, good! grar! good writing , bad situation. i need to know what happens! oh... i just had a visual orgasm. yes... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe. Yeah, I'm getting addicted to changing my pen name. The end of this chapter confused the hell out of me. If Sylvester & Cyril just got there how were Sylv & Carrion having sex.. and why was Justin bleeding? Possibly I'm missing something S Update soon, anyway ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() As always, wonderful chapter.. but... Sylv. And Carrion. WHAT? Why, Sylv, why? Seriously, big shock there. I thought he was such a good guy too! I hope it's all a big misunderstanding... Ha, I love huge dramatic surprises. You better write the next chapter soon, because this is a cruel cliffhanger! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fix it. FIX IT! He can't be doing that... And ins't she a lesbian? I realy hope it isn't what it looks like, even though it is. Gr. Bad Sylvester, bad! |
![]() ![]() ![]() M, smut. I love this story. :) Sylvester is sex on legs. The rose garden is like something out of a romance novel... aren't either of these boys into arsen? ;) I like the puns. And the llamas. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This is becoming quite an interesting story. |
![]() ![]() GOD! I loved it when Cyril put his head on Sylv's lap and did that. That was hot! More of that! Wee! Update MUCH sooner cause I LUFF this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm this is interesting. It paces a little too fast but I'm hoping for clarification in the next chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg Update more... More chaps. like this, please!-sighs- |
![]() ![]() ![]() god. i love it. i'm jealous. this is so interesting and beautiful *faves* |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an absolutely amazing chapter. Great discriptions, ESPECIALLY at the end, God, I think that end chapter has to be one of my favorite passasges from anything I've read. It's great. Hooray for fluff! Update again soon if you please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() le hotness indeed need moregod. bad/good addiction |