Reviews for Pretty Boys and Pretty Girls |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hmonly one thing with this i dont think all gays and lesbians have the hots for each other. actually, i am pretty sure. that would be the same logic as all girls love all boys. but anyhow, very sexual |
![]() ![]() ![]() a little derranged ahahah. wow. love this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hminteresting chapter violent. i like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting. really you authors note can really bring someone back down to earth after writing this. reminds me of something i wrote for my friend. it actually made me feel like a puppet, but i cant remember thinking when i wrote it made her cry though. that is too awful |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahaha. i love that phrase "paradoxial piece of ass" something about the way he is ignorant but real hmm. too familiar |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahh i love thisso crazily creative and sexy?ah, i cant find a better word of the moment well, i lie, but yeah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you know, i feel like i am having one of those days where you see the other kids on the side of playground, not discluded just likeyou can a day too late and now you are screwed anyhow. i love this? no, love is too strong/not enough whatever. |
![]() ![]() ![]() godi hate axe with a passion (dear god really) was it axe. yes, axe ugh, taste like shit dying (not to be lude, not my type you see. hah, i feel ridiculous) this story is enticing |
![]() ![]() ![]() and since when can one talk in detention ah whatever, i havent had it for too long to remember. interesting though i had starbucks last night and i want a frappacino. to bad my hips dont agree |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw. inspiringly clever i will end up reading the whole thing and slacking off on whatever i should be doing. and they still make whalebone corsets?i am extremely interested if they do |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah.i closed my last review box and it was long too. just to let you know anyhow, i was blobbing around and found this story. interesting and captivating. from what i can see, mostly stories on your part. that is exciting.i like stories |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cyril got poetic. I do declare, it turns my heart to mush. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice nice, i dunno though, Ryan still sounds pretty hot! i want him to be more involved! i can't wait for more, i can only handle so much fluff! lol haha update more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() -huggles you- Yays! I am proud at your update! And very pleased! -dances a little banana dance for you- That was pure art, sweetie. Oh yes, I did notice a little grammar mistake here and there, but it was so small. That update was all about teh fluff! I loved it. "Ha ha. Insert here. I love sex jokes." Hilarious! That reminded me of me and my boyfriend and our stupid sex jokes. xP I've noticed this before but I didn't have the chance to say this in a review. I don't see a strong connection between Cyril and Carrion. You did say that Cyril's in love with her, but you didn't really get to develop that fact. Or am I just wrong? I hope it can come in the later chapters. This is getting very good! I loved every second of it, sweetie! Your descriptions are excellent and I can really feel vibes from Sylv and Cyril. Don't stress yourself, but update soon! -huggles- Yes, I do sound like a mother sometimes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, hurray! This was the cutest thing I've ever read in my life! Definitely deserved that after such a long wait! Ha... The word "duckie" at the beginning made me laugh. Sylv was insanely cute in this one! Please update fast! And don't be mean (shaking fist). Unless you have to. Made my day! |