| Reviews for Pretty Boys and Pretty Girls |
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   a lonely september chapter 12 . 4/26/2006 i am very very very very proud of you. but very angry that it took so long to update. mwah. -lovesyoutodeath- this is awesome i loveitsomuch. i missed it. this chapter was so beautiful. so deep and romantic and sweet... me loved. : ) |
| dollface and her cancer chapter 12 . 4/26/2006 A Cyril / Sylvester update. Thank God.I've been waiting for my fix. |
| multiples of six chapter 12 . 4/26/2006 A maze! That's so cute & original of Sylv. And the "insert here" bit was hilarious. Write more soon please! |
| My Sweetheart the Drunk chapter 12 . 4/25/2006 absoloutely fantastic, as usual. how do, you do it my dear? |
| Esquirella chapter 12 . 4/25/2006 This was very romantic and cool. |
| Never.Forgetten.Rememberance chapter 12 . 4/25/2006 You're going to be mean... Hope not to mean, lol. This chapter was sweet. Hope you update again soo. So do try, kay? |
| so-brie-K chapter 11 . 4/24/2006 Where has this story been all my life? This was great. Cyril, Sylvester, kendra, Carrion, they all rule. I'm keeping an eye on this one. Oh, and sex scenes- hot, totally. |
| saccharine lust aerial chapter 1 . 4/20/2006 i know right about now, you're like, if i get another review from her I'll scream, but I can't live without this story. please update! it's my lifeline... |
| saccharine lust aerial chapter 11 . 4/20/2006 OHMYGOD! sorry that was retarded, but my computer was a dumbass and I didn't get to read the last chapter KENDRA SLEPT W/ MONICA damn! carrion's gonna kick her ass... |
| saccharine lust aerial chapter 8 . 4/19/2006 this is probably the best story on fp. I heart you. sylv and cyril are so delicious. and I love picturing what carrion wears! please finish! |
| blue-eyes91 chapter 11 . 4/16/2006 Ryan sounds cute! i think that im lking him more than Sylv, for Cyril that is. but yeah totally loving the story next chap please! |
| a lonely september chapter 11 . 4/8/2006 ithinki'mgoingtoSCREAM! do you know how often i read stories? this is like the third one i've ever read! -screams until her throat is raw- this was .amazing. i absolutely love this. i love everything about it. the sexual violence, the love, the lust. .. the hate, the everything. it's all so sweet, the relationships between them carrion-cyril cyril-sylv sylv-kendra kendra-carrion. . . on and on, it's gorgeous. . . i loveit. you have to continue, you just must. i'll be checking like every day and if you dont i swear i'll die. this is so fucking amazing. ah. i know i suck at reviews, but this just has to be enough for you to know that i absolutely love this, your story, and everything about this! CONTINUE! |
| Tia chapter 11 . 4/7/2006 The backstory with Kendra and Monica is a poorly-done plot twist. It adds unneeded drama. And the introduction of Ryan, the cute gay football player? Again, more drama. It's unnecessary. What is this story about, anyway? It seemed to revolve around Cyril and Sylvester's relationship, but then there was this side thing with Kendra and Monica - which is very convenient, by the way, that Kendra just HAPPENS to have had a thing with Monica and can therefore talk her into leaving Cyril alone - and this new character Ryan who may just be a potential love interest for Cyril... Don't drag your story on too long. Don't add unnecessary information, extra drama, etc. The characters in this story were a bit 2-D to begin with, and now there's going to be all these side plots...it's certainly not improving anything. Please don't take this as a flame, just some blunt advice. |
| My Sweetheart the Drunk chapter 11 . 4/7/2006 ah! you are so mean! now i have to choose between ryan and sylvester! no! |
| multiples of six chapter 11 . 4/6/2006 Awesome story D I agree with everyone about Sylvester's unbelievable hotness, and Cyril's adorableness.. and Carrion sounds absolutely wow. I can't believe Kendra slept with Monica! *sigh* and I find this new Ryan character very interesting. I wonder if he will come between Sylvester & Cyril. Write more soon please D |